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After the end

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My arms feel heavy, for,
in time, the flesh and bone will fall
and be consumed and formed and changed
and, in the end, stop all their movement
hardened, softened, robbed of all
their former strength and motives, of
their sense and place within this world,
and given, in return, the steady
lifeless calmness of the dead.
Just doodling while being allowed to use the teacher's PC during English lessons because there is nothing for me to do...
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Crusnik-O2's avatar
There are times like these where I can not believe that English is not your native language. The understanding you have of the language is simply astounding, and FAR beyond your years.

*coughs* now that that is out of the way. :heart:

I adore this poem. It makes you stop and think about what death really is, and what it truly means.

And as others have said before me, the beat of the poem is breathtaking. I keep reading it over and over again to try and memorize that wonderful pounding of words.

:heart: